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New ff:Mazhab! Episode 1 Rukhsar expecting Twin Boys?
I-Luv-Rashi:
ff:MAZHAB!
Writers Note:
I have written many ff's on daily soap characters and couples but somehow I managed to keep every ff different from another one.One day I was having cup of tea and typing scene of my ff where female lead had to pray to KahnaJi (Lord Krishna of Hindu's){I really respect each and every religion from bottom of my heart!}.I wanted that scene to be emotional and I selected each and every word very carefully and I was successful as in comments all readers appreciated that particular scene!
This brought a thought in my mind that I should try to explain religious teachings and as Religion is a sensitive issue I chose to write a ff on Islamic teachings as it is my religion as well and I know about it more than any other religion.Second challenge for me was to make it interesting as I myself will also not read any story till I find it interesting and entertaining and I have been always searching for a major interesting plot for this ff which perfectly fits in the Islamic backdrop of the story.
I want to keep everything in this ff related to Islam authentic so from last 20 days I have been researching on many things and along with that I have been thinking of an interesting Plot which can capture almost major teachings of Islam with interesting cliff-hanger type of twists and finally I have decided the plot of my ff.
I want this ff to be read by Many Many readers and get message of Islam which is "Love Humanity" ,this is the only reason that I am promoting this ff from 5 days on almost every busy forum but I am unable to get readers ,I will be really grateful if you people also encourage others to read this atleast the pilot update.
I hope you all will read and Like it,And also appreciate it by your comments as readers comments are biggest return gifts for the writers.Please read and understand it as it will contain everything Meaningful.I want to inform you all this is not adapted from any story,drama or movie which ultimately means no plagiarism.
Kind Regards,
Alina.
I-Luv-Rashi:
Plot Of The FF:
Tabrez Khan is a harsh,selfish and mean landlord.He owns a broad piece of land of 5000 Acres.He has a eight months pregnant wife and Two twin daughters (Alizay and Saba)who were born 1.5 years ago.Yup his wife conceived very soon after birth if her twin daughter and behind this was Tabrez's selfish wish of his wife (Rukhsar) producing a son (heir) to his family.
Tabrez's brother Gul Khan and his Mother Rukhsana try a lot to explain Tabrez about his mis deeds and going against Allah's (Islamic) commands but all in vain.
Gul Khan even threatens him of breaking all relations with Him but Tabrez gives a damn to it.
Tabrez even took part in Elections recently and fought for seat of Member of Provincial Assembly (MPA) but he failed miserably in elections.Gul Khan has something about his past which haunts him oftenly.
This story opens when a Daai Ama (An uneducated Gynec in Villages) informs Khan family that Rukhsar is again expecting twins and Tabrez is sure that this time he will get his heir and in happiness he decides to take Rukhsar to city doctor for Sonography!
We cannot expect anything good from Tabrez as he breaks records set by himself in selfishness and Meanness.He perfectly knows how to use other's needs for his personal pleasures and luxuries!
I-Luv-Rashi:
Character's :
Tabrez Khan:
A mean and selfish man.
Rukhsar Khan:
Tabrez's wife a sweet and simple character.
Alizay and Saba are twin daughters of Tabrez and Rukhsar.
Rukhsana:
Tabrez's and Gul Khan's mother .She is a religious lady.
Gul Khan:
Tabrez's elder brother and he has knowledge of Islam but limited so he can never answer queries about Islam.He has something about his past which haunts him often.
Baano:
Gul Khan's wife ,She is a very complicated character.
Shah Zamaan :
Gul khan's and Baano's only son.
Hamida Khan:
Tabrez's Second wife and very much dominating and manipulating.
Other characters will be introduced as story progresses further.
I-Luv-Rashi:
Index:
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Bismillah-ar-Rahman-ar-Raheem;
(Begin with Allah's name the Most Merciful and
Beneficient.)
ff:MazHab-Allah is The Greatest!
Disclaimer: Any Resemblance of any kind to any Serial,Movie,Os,Ff,SS etc is Purely co-incidental.
This ff is on a very sensitive issue and both criticism and appreciation both are welcomed but in limit of manners.
This ff is not meant to hurt anyones feelings and if this hurts anyone's feelings then I am sorry from bottom of my heart.Islamic content used is this ff is being used after lots of research and is 100% authentic.
Episode 1 { MahaBeginning }
( Khan Family is Introduced!,Tabrez to become MPA?,Rukhsar is expecting Twins?,Will she deliver both boys?,Shah Zamaan meets with an accident! And Much More...! )
Episode opens up with a view of a very big Haveli (Palace type of House.),Inside it there is a woman sitting watching Tv and another Woman is sitting with her picking pebbles from rice plate.A little boy comes running and says,"Daadi Ami A faqeer (Begger) is outside and he says that he wants Khair (Money) from Rukhsana bibi,I have told him that no Rukhsana lives here but he is not listening!".
The old lady smiles and removing her glasses says,"Beta I am Rukhsana!". The boy is astonished and says,"Really Daadi Ami your name is Rukhsana?".
The lady nods in positive and she then calls out to woman who is watching tv saying,"Baano beta go and give Khair(Money) to Faqeer Baba (Begger!)".
Baano says,"Amaa please give me few minutes ,I am watching soap and today they are going to reveal who is Frightening Gopi Vahu as a ghost!You please tell anyone else I can't leave!".
"Beta Allah says the one who comes to your doorstep for help is sent by Me so don't make him wait!Please go and give Money to Fakeer!".
Then Maryam (Maid) enters and says,"Baano BibiJi I think they are just fooling us and Rashi is the one who is scaring Gopi vahu because she doesn't want Gopi's Husband Ahem to unite with her!".
Baano says,"Ok na Let me watch!you go and give this Khair to Faqeer Baba.!".
Maryam leaves with Money and Comes back with Money and says that Faqeer Baba left before she went to give him money!Rukhsana becomes sad on listening to this and says,"Look what happened because of your this stupid drama,Faqeer Baba left empty handed from my doorstep!".
Baano makes face and says,"Don't worry Amaa nothing happens!,and why are you cleaning these rice there are innumerable servants in this Haveli they will do it!".
Rukhsana doesn't answer.Rukhsar comes and Rukhsana says,"Come Rukhsar sit carefully!".Maryam(Maid) comes and happily says,"Bibiji Rukhsar bibiji's eighth month has started na?."
Rukhsana smiles and nods in positive.Rukhsana asks,"Rukhsar beta where are Alizay and Saba?".Rukhsar answers that they both are playing with toys. Maryam says,"Those our neighbours were talking things that how Alizay and Saba are not of two years fullu and Rukhsar bibi is again on verge of Delivering other child!".Rukhsana tells her to go and work and she asks About Gul khan and Tabrez Khan from Baano and Rukhsar!Rukhsar says,"Amaa they have gone for a Daawat (Feast) and tonight they will come late!".
At Farm House:
Gul khan and Tabrez and other guests are sitting and watching dance of Nautch girls who arendancing on Munni Badnaam Hui.Tabrez touches his sexual organ in seductive way and says,"Pink!" And winks at Gul Khan.Gul khan signals to a servant and Dancer wearing Pink dress is taken in a bedroom ,Tabrez also heads towards that bedroom behind that girl and locks the door.Gul khan thinks,"Bhai will enjoy this feast a lot!" And smirks.
Gul Khan takes a sip of whisky and holds wrist of another girl and tells her to come with him and the girl agrees happily and they also head towards a room!
Next Day:
Gul Khan and Tabrez Khan are sitting in Otaaq (Otaaq is a Bungalow in which men's affairs are dealt and women are not allowed there!)
Gul Khan says,"Bhai you failed in elections that was a miserable defeat!".
Tabrez turns sad and says ,"Yes Gul I took part in elections for seat of MPA (Member of Provincial Assembly) and I thought that out of my 5000 acre land only 4000 acre is cultivated and other 1000 acres left because of shortage of irrigation water so I thought once I become MPA this problem will be solved but I failed in elections and that Akbar Qureshi won this seat!".
Gul khan says,"No problem , maybenext time!".Tabrez thinks,"Not next time this time only!".A servant comes and says,"Chote Saeein(Junior Lord,Tabrez was called Chote Saaein and Gul Bade Saaein as Gul is elder brother of Tbrez!) Munawer has come to meet you and he is crying outside!Tabrez tells them to send him in and he says,"He forgot that he is just a peasant the way he went to that Akbar and Tried to degrade me by saying lots of negative things about me!".
Munawer enters and he removes his cap and puts it on feet of Tabrez and cries for forgiveness and asks Tabrez to return his land otherwise his Family will die of hunger but Tabrez kicks him out!
At Haveli:
Rukhsana is feeding apples to Rukhsar and says,"Beta Daai Ama is coming today to see you so get ready!".
Baano says,"Whats the use what will Daai ama do if she (Rukhsar) is carrying daughter?".Rukhsana says,"Talk good if you don't look good!".Baano makes face and Rukhsar smiles and agrees to get ready to meet Daai Ama.Baano says,"I know Daai Ama has knowledge and she will tell everything that Rukhsar is carrying girl and again drama will happen in our Haveli like it happened on birth of Saba and Alizay!".
Rukhsar gets tensed and Rukhsana shuts Baano saying,"Allah will bless my Tabrez with heir! And what have you done just by giving son to Gul khan?".Baano says that she has given birth to a son and her Shah Zamaan is only the Heir to the family!
Daai Ama enters and greets everyone.Daai Ama checks Rukhsar and happily announces to everyone that once again Rukhsar is carrying Twins.Rukhsana thanks Allah for double happiness! Baano asks Daai Ama if Rukhsar is carrying sons? And Daai Ama says she doesn't know gender and in fact no one can tell gender but She is getting vibes that this time they are boys!Baano feels in secured and Rukhsar smiles in happiness!
Tabrez returns Home and is super happy on getting this news!He decided to go to city for Sonography and Rukhsana and Rukhsar get tensed but no one can say anything and Rukhsar and Tabrez leave for city!
Baano smirks and says,"Now everything will be cleared!".
Rukhsana says,"Baano beta girl or boy just pray it can come to this world because now Tabrez's wish for heir has grew so much that I am scared what he will do if...!".
At Haveli:
Shah Zamaan Comes running and asks for Money from Rukhsana for snacks and Rukhsana gives him money and he happily leaves!Baano says,"Amaa I told you na that Evil Rashi is scaring Gopi disguised as ghost that too of Gopi's Husbands lover!".
Rukhsana does Tauba Tauba ( Seeking Forgiveness from Allah) and leaves saying that she is not interesting in all this!".
Soon Alizay and Saba comes running and Saba says,"Daadi...!" And she makes a signal with her hands and Rukhsana understands and says,"Oh so you are here to listen the story??"Alizay nods and Rukhsana makes them sit on her lap and says ,"Ok today I will tell you story of Allah's beautiful Prophet Yousaf (A.S)."
Rukhsana starts the Story she says,"Hazrat Yousaf (A.S) was son of Prophet Yaqoub (A.S) and he had a brother Yameen and he aslo had 11 step brothers .Hazrat Yaqoub ,their father used to love Yousaf the most and other 11 step brothers of Yousaf didn't like this .One day Yousaf saw a dream and that dream was Sun ,Moon and eleven stars were respecting him ,when he went to his father to ask meaning of that dream his father understood the meaning hence he instructed Yousaf not to share that dream with anyone ,not even with his brothers.One day Yousaf's step brothers made a plan that they will take Yousaf to play ground around jungle and they will dump Yousaf in Well,then they will slaughter a lamp and will put blood on all over yousaf's kurta and will tell father that a Animal ate Yousaf.They all followed the plan same like the planned and dumped Yousaf in well and when they reached home Yousaf's father denied to believe their story and he said that they are lieing but he will wait as he has belief on Allah!There a troupe stopped near the well for drinking water and One man found Yousaf (A beautiful kid ) in well bucket and he thought he will sell This boy in Egyptian market and will get a nice price!The man hid Yousaf in his luggage...!" Rukhsana stops and says that they will continue the story next day as she is tired Rukhsana stands up to go but Alizay stops her by holdinh her hand.Rukhsana smiles and at the same time a servant brings Injured Shah Zamaan in his arms inside.Rukhsana and Baano are shocked and Rukhsana asks What happend? And servant answers that Shah Zamaan met with an accident!Episode ends on shocked face of Baano!
MahaPrecap:
Tabrez Khan is sitting with few men and he touching his moustache with a smirk on his face says,"If you will do my work I will do your work!".The men agree to Tabrez's condition and Scene shifts to Gul Khan standing in a Mosque and thinks,"In my life first Time I had entered a Mosque Allah Help me today!."Tears start flowing from His Eyes!
Buddy me and comment on this thread to recieve pm's whenever Update my this ff.Sorry for grammatical errors if any!
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